Can you guys give some feedback on my website?

[tkepongo]

I just created a website for my fraternity a couple days ago. The profiles under the "Roster" page all have the same information except for three (my profile is under Tony Pham if you were wondering). Can you guys give me some feedback please? I want to have this nicely polished before I write a proposal for publishing it on our official website.

http://web.mac.com/tkepongo/Tau_TKE/Welcome.html

 

[dmr727]

The one thing I'd do is clean up the jaggies on the paddle image of the "More About TKE" page. It just stands out to me as a little less polished than everything else on the site.

 

[r1ch4rd]

Along with the jaggie paddle I'd just give the text a quick re-read as well. I noticed a few grammar mistakes. This is only a minor thing though, looks good to me.

 

[Stampyhead]

Ouch, the red text on the charcoal grey background hurts my eyes. Take a look at the page again and observe how the red text jumps back and forth on that background. Not cool. Maybe try a lighter color for the text?

 

[ErikCLDR]

I think its good.

One really nit picky thing is I don't really like the layout of the links at the top of the page. It seems unbalanced having long terms like "Welcome" and "News/Events" and the on the left while on the right there are short words like "Roster" and "Photos"

My suggestions- something like...

Change "Welcome" to "Home"
Change "Events/News" to just "Events' or just "News"

or

Keep "Welcome"
Change "Events/News" to just "Events' or just "News"
Change "Photos" to "Pictures"

I will say the white on charcoal text is a little harsh but not bad and I don't think its a huge issue.

 

[eric55lv]

its ok and how did you make it? was it free?

 

[tkepongo]

i used iweb 2008 and a 60 day .mac trial (i'll have my fraternity pay for it)