Where in PA are you from? I saw something similar to this in a university art gallery in southern PA, but I think it was a lot longer.MacFan782040 said:
Northeastern PA. Took about 3 days to edit. Thanks for the comments!sorryiwasdreami said:Where in PA are you from? I saw something similar to this in a university art gallery in southern PA, but I think it was a lot longer.
Thanks. Yeah I didn't know my post had been moved. I thought it got deleted-- The continunity of the wet shirt is a blooper, but oh well. And I agree with the quickness of the transitions, and I should have used a tripod more for the shots. It was only supposed to be a 2-5 min. movie for our TV/Video class in school, with a storyboard behind it. We had to incorporate something in that starts the movie and also ends it (that's why we did the trophy case). (Another example is the storybook in SHrek)Mr. Anderson said:Not bad...some of the edits were a bit abrupt, going directly from a handheld camera view to a tripod. And you had a classic goof on the final battle scene where you were all sweaty and then had a clip in there with a clean/dry shirt, and right back to sweaty
The titles at the end were fun seeing how the sweat got on your shirt.
Good job - what did you edit it on?
I don't think I was harsh. I've been at countless meetings where some stiff in a suit ripped apart design work simply because he/she didn't like 'blue', 'that style of type', 'text is too small', 'prefer the old brochure', 'its too trendy' etc, etc. If you believe you have a talent in a particular field then you have to stand strong in that belief against mountains of criticisms, if youre not able to then perhaps you arent good enough.Langly said:Hey, nice one Messrs. freakboy and gangst, that's the way to encourage young film-makers How about some positive and constructive criticism instead of grinding young MacFan into the dirt?
THANK YOU somebody who understands the purpose of itCapt Underpants said:Holy crap, people. This isn't a freakin blockbuster movie here. Four guys wanted to have some fun, so they made a video. Stop being so rude...