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Great, thanks. Not sure if it's really my place to edit your guide (or any guide, for that matter) but I did want to try to help in some way so, to start, I'll share a "visual" guide to iOS 5 that I created in the iOS 5 forum:

https://forums.macrumors.com/threads/1254533/

Perhaps you, or others, can take images or just ideas from there and apply them to your guide. Or perhaps not. Either way, if I can help in any other way, feel free to let me know.
 
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