Critique my documentary

Discussion in 'Digital Video' started by bonsaidetective, Jun 17, 2007.

  1. bonsaidetective macrumors member

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    I had an art exhibit at a small college and had to give a lecture. I hate giving lectures, so I made a no-budget movie instead. Any comments are appreciated.

    oops here's the link:
    http://www.rlabney.com/rlabney.com/Movie.html
     
  2. Rod Rod macrumors 68020

    Rod Rod

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    It's a good alternative to a speech!

    A couple of things stuck out: there's a lot of hiss in the audio, and the two times where you had yourself make similar comments, back to back, wearing different shirts, well in each case one of those clips could be cut out because it's repetitious. Another thing is there could have been more music, especially in the part where you're describing your work as a sort of music and (maybe?) describing the type of music it is.
     

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