critique my inital logo design

Discussion in 'Design and Graphics' started by bluetooth, Jun 15, 2007.

  1. bluetooth macrumors 6502a

    bluetooth

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    working on a new logo for myself. I like these colours, but not sure what direction. attached are 4 initial variations. let me know if any of these appeal to you or stand out or if they do not?

    btw, I am a freelance graphic designer and would like to keep the logo clean and simple but something that portrays a good design sense etc.

    cool. thanks!

    edit - gone back to the drawing board
     
  2. mapple.pro macrumors newbie

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    VD is not very pleasant...
    well thats what i heard.

    apart from that, i think they need to be simplified even further.
     
  3. CanadaRAM macrumors G5

    CanadaRAM

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    none of them do much for me. Top right one appears to spell the name incorrectly?

    It's incongruous to present the name Vivid in such non-vivid colour.

    As mentioned the acronym VD has bad connotations and should be avoided.
     
  4. mapple.pro macrumors newbie

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    true.

    if you want a solid background to design of this nature.
    have a read about "gestalt theory"

    you will be surprised
     
  5. LeviG macrumors 65816

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    cant really say I like any of them either to be honest.

    And next time could we get a jpeg/gif or something please, saves having to download the pdf.
     
  6. AlexisV macrumors 68000

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    I like the typeface you've used on the left. Just use that - no need for any symbol or 'VD' letters :)
     
  7. Father Jack macrumors 68020

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    Definitely abandon the VD, it just conjures up a very scary image !!!

    Personally I like design number 4 ... :)
     
  8. bluetooth thread starter macrumors 6502a

    bluetooth

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    ok thanks guys - I will take this back the drawing board.
     

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