Critique my new Product Promo Reel, thanks!

Discussion in 'Digital Video' started by highjumppudding, May 22, 2008.

  1. highjumppudding macrumors 6502

    highjumppudding

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    #1
    Hey,

    I created a new Product Promo Reel for one of my Products. Please let me know what you think. I took the old one off-line so there is anything to critique against. But please let me know what you think!

    http://www.stevenpriceproductions.com/

    It is on the Reel page.
     
  2. dogtanian macrumors 6502

    dogtanian

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  3. Dr. Rengers macrumors member

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    Looks nice! Some points:

    • I would take out some effects (like slowmotion, old film look, time travel, TV burn in), because afaik they're not that special. So basically make it shorter with the best effects only.

    • Sometimes I didn't really notice the effect, especially the "Film Look" effects. Perhaps use 'before and after' shots, or a 'split-screen'.

    • Why does it say "training" ?
     

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