i appreciate all the comments, information and tips provided in this thread. the last few posts i wish were posted a bit earlier. i had to submit what i had due to a deadline. i'm going to work on it a bit more because i do need to have this ready for the next program/school paper.
FYI the add is B&W but all the artwork/logos i had were in color, i guess i should have mentioned that, occasionally i do need it in color because the red, white, and blue are important to our company.
as to the use of professionals, locally we don't have a big stock of design professionals and the ones that we do have aren't of the caliber you can find in larger metropolitan areas with better design schools. i don't do business over the interwebs after being ripped off years ago for design work i did (artwork not adds). an example is our commercial, which can be seen
here. i sent him the logos in .psd and.png and he didn't do anything to clean them up before he used them. i would have at least thought he would have gotten rid of the white back grounds or the white antialiasing (sp?) before putting them in the commercial. i used his product out of necessity due to deadline.
in case you're interested this was the
final submital.
i read the design forums a lot and knew i'd get good information from you guys. again thank you very much for all your input.