Critique some edits I have done?

Discussion in 'Picture Gallery' started by G5Unit, Nov 8, 2007.

  1. G5Unit macrumors 68020

    G5Unit

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    I have recently gotten into the habit of photoshopping picture for people. Yet most of my critics are teenagers who have never before used photoshop.

    I thought that maybe if I came here I could get a better point of view from some members here.

    Here you go

    Most of them are done under an hour and I could possibly achieve better results if I worked a little longer.

    I'm not trying to draw people to my flickr. I just want some suggestions.:)
     
  2. iAlan macrumors 65816

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    My point of view - you have nice looking friends! Even the guy on the bike is not bad...

    Quite like most of the shots, especially the polaroid layout. A hour (on each) well spent!
     
  3. benlee macrumors 65816

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    I agree you have nice looking friends.

    The photos look great. I too like the polaroid shot.
     
  4. G5Unit thread starter macrumors 68020

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    Thanks. I got the idea from a similar photo I have seen online.

    I feel as if it is a tad over exposed though.
     
  5. CarlsonCustoms macrumors 6502

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    Wow.. you got some really pretty friends..

    SO THAT"S THE TRICK!!! You take pictures of them under the guise of being their "friend" and then you slip from friend to boy-friend..

    Man I need a camera!
     
  6. G5Unit thread starter macrumors 68020

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    Haha, strictly professional.
     
  7. byakuya macrumors 6502a

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    very pretty people and very well captured...I like your gallery.
     
  8. LeviG macrumors 65816

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    Personally can't see any major issues with any of them, maybe some minor exposure issues on a couple but nothing you couldn't sort in photoshop.

    The one I do have a suggestion on is the Miranda (polaroid) one, I personally would loose the lens flare, I think its a bit over the top and detracts from the rest of the picture, maybe try reducing its opacity if you really want to keep it.

    EDIT: oh and mustn't forget the - very pretty people bit of the post :)
     
  9. G5Unit thread starter macrumors 68020

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    Thank you everyone for the input!

    Again, I didn't personally take any of these pictures. They were taken by people who I don't have the name of.


    And yes, I will reduce the lens flare.
     
  10. nukiduz macrumors 6502

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    i find the edits nice and fun, excepting some excessive glow use and the fact that i don't like pics to be written on. but that may be a personal choice. in general, the pics are fine, the edits too, and so are your friends ;)
     
  11. G5Unit thread starter macrumors 68020

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    I made a new one. I got rid of the names but the original picture was still very glow-ish. I tried some HDR(fake). Mind you it was 10 30 and night and I was tired.

    Here
     

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