Feed back on my video

Discussion in 'Digital Video' started by dbl.ceo, Aug 1, 2012.

  1. dbl.ceo macrumors newbie

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  2. daybreak macrumors 6502a

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    Looked at your video. I ask myself who are you trying to target?. Too much jump cut talking. Your presentation needs to capture the attention of the audience.
    Good idea but a lots of but.....................
     
  3. heyimandy, Aug 2, 2012
    Last edited: Aug 2, 2012

    heyimandy macrumors member

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    Your cutting is understandable... it's the classic YouTube cut. I think the content is lacking though to keep your audience. 5 minutes of a talking head is really going to need some humor and excitement. Be more creative... otherwise I think your format is suitable for YouTube.
     
  4. WRP macrumors 6502a

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    Write a loose script. That type of dialog cutting should be under broll. I assume you did this to get rid of "ums" and "aghs". Some jump cuts are ok but if you can't string together a coherent sentence without needing to edit it, you shouldn't be speaking in front of a camera. I got 45 seconds in and closed the tab.
     

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