Feed back on my video

daybreak

macrumors 6502a
Sep 4, 2009
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Looked at your video. I ask myself who are you trying to target?. Too much jump cut talking. Your presentation needs to capture the attention of the audience.
Good idea but a lots of but.....................
 

heyimandy

macrumors member
Jun 12, 2012
91
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Toronto, ON
Your cutting is understandable... it's the classic YouTube cut. I think the content is lacking though to keep your audience. 5 minutes of a talking head is really going to need some humor and excitement. Be more creative... otherwise I think your format is suitable for YouTube.
 
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WRP

macrumors 6502a
Jul 20, 2011
510
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Boston
Write a loose script. That type of dialog cutting should be under broll. I assume you did this to get rid of "ums" and "aghs". Some jump cuts are ok but if you can't string together a coherent sentence without needing to edit it, you shouldn't be speaking in front of a camera. I got 45 seconds in and closed the tab.