Feed back on my video

Discussion in 'Digital Video' started by dbl.ceo, Aug 1, 2012.

  1. dbl.ceo macrumors newbie

    Jul 17, 2010
  2. daybreak macrumors 6502a

    Sep 4, 2009
    Looked at your video. I ask myself who are you trying to target?. Too much jump cut talking. Your presentation needs to capture the attention of the audience.
    Good idea but a lots of but.....................
  3. heyimandy, Aug 2, 2012
    Last edited: Aug 2, 2012

    heyimandy macrumors member

    Jun 12, 2012
    Toronto, ON
    Your cutting is understandable... it's the classic YouTube cut. I think the content is lacking though to keep your audience. 5 minutes of a talking head is really going to need some humor and excitement. Be more creative... otherwise I think your format is suitable for YouTube.
  4. WRP macrumors 6502a

    Jul 20, 2011
    Write a loose script. That type of dialog cutting should be under broll. I assume you did this to get rid of "ums" and "aghs". Some jump cuts are ok but if you can't string together a coherent sentence without needing to edit it, you shouldn't be speaking in front of a camera. I got 45 seconds in and closed the tab.

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