Honestly, it just seemed like a bunch of random clips thrown together. What it your message? After watching it, I don't have a clue as to what you are promoting or what you are trying to say. If you have to tell me, then you have failed. It reminds me of student projects from a community college intro to video class. I say that because it is clearly lacking a solid theme and a lot of the clips are so random with different effects with no reason. It's like.. "Hey lets throw this (effect) on to see what it looks like. Okay... that looks cool lets leave it."
Unless you are just having fun (youtube style), or creating art/experimental video, you have to make sure that EVERY frame has a reason to support the message. You have to step back to make sure the pieces all work together to support the whole. Otherwise, you have failed.
Having access to equipment doesn't make you talented or successful. But it's a start!
Other than that, some of the shots are pretty well done. 😀