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First Script - Seishin

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salacious

macrumors 6502a
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Hi All,

This is my first script, please could you Critique it, I'm a month away from setting up shooting for it, i don't really wanna spend too much time editing this anymore, it is my first piece i have no knowledge of script writing so basically its as amateurish as it can get.

Thanks

www.slideshare.com/8salacious9/seishin
 
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