Picture #1 looks so much better to me. I love the reflection off of the water and the water bottle on the bike. Kind of ties them together metaphorically (if that is the right word) or maybe a better word would be conceptually. anyway, I just like that look better than picture #2. Very nicely done.
The sun is more blown-out in the first, but the colors in the reflection off-set it's effect (imo). I go with #1. Also, there is a more noticeable reflection if you want to say "reflection".
Dale
Thx guys,
Based on feedback, I played with the Post Processing on #1, here is version #2 vs original
Version #2; reduced exposure by -0.3 EV (original as already -1.0 EV as exposed in camera, that's in the EXIF data), expanded the crop, PP out the reflective stripe on the tool bag, some other stuff.
The image is as dialed as I feel is possible, since the bench seat was so far from the lake, the foreground does consist of that much sand - and not a more balance of sky/water, oh well it is what it is....
The added wood post and the swim marker gives a LH anchor for your eye to wander among 3 elements; sun/bike/wood post, while reducing the emphasis on the bike slightly for more balance.
Picture #1 Version #2
Original Picture #1
fwiw,
These were not really planned shots either, rather I went on a 55 minute bike ride, with my camera gear in the backpack, knowing the sun set around 8:30pm, so I was initially just taking sunset shots...........after taking 6-7 and looking at them on the camera LCD backscreen, frankly those are a dime/dozen, lacking uniqueness.
Having my bike resting on the bench I decided to include it in the foreground, took a few, realized shooting into the sun so put the external Speedlite 580 on and tried different powers to bring balance to the exposure of the sky/water/sand/bike.
Realizing this is a public beach and there were plenty of people around, so I was constantly waiting for the scene to appear empty, and upon re-composition to eliminate some people cropped off the bottom tire porting in the 2nd shot... that de-values that shot somewhat.
So, trying to capture my love of Mountain Biking in Michigan in some unique fashion........that is my pursuit/drive......different, unique, compelling....
These miss that mark, but are the start of the journey.