Hi folks, Longtime reader, first time posting anything. Can anyone offer a critique of this? It's going to be printed on a 4'x8' vinyl banner to be displayed outdoors. I'm not a designer and I've looked at this thing for so long that I can't even tell what works and what doesn't. It'd be nice to get a fresh pair of eyes on it. I'm sending this to the print shop to silkscreen several hundred of these, so any advice you can offer would be greatly appreciated. Thanks all.