It looks nice and this would be my choice of render. I don't mind the vertical camera. But I do question rather the home button will be embedded into the display or at least ready for this years iPhone, which seems to be the big alteration if moved to the back of the iPhone. Either way, I don't foresee Apple retaining the home button physically this year (For the OLED model at least) on the front, it will either be moved to the back or embedded.
That render looks absolutely gorgeous. I do have some doubts about the placement of the fingerprint sensor. I want to think that it will be embedded on the front display but my gut feeling says that it will be virtual home button is gonna be on the front and fingerprint sensor on the back just where the apple logo is.