iPhone Review critism needed

[Nickwell24]

Hey everyone,

So i'm trying to start a YT channel, but haven't gotten a lot of criticism and I thrive off of criticism and advice on what I need to improve on. This is not me asking to sub to my channel, so please don't think that, i just trust the opinion of you guys so I am posting this here:

Http://www.youtube.com/LastStopReviews

As previously stated this is NOT a means of me trying to get subs, just trying to improve my videos. So any and all criticism is appreciated. Thanks guys, Nick.

 

[Nickwell24]

Bump

 

[macjram]

Are you a redhead?

I don't like how there is a lot of space above your head in your video Xgearlive shadow unboxing

 

[alFR]

The whole unboxing thing is tired, really tired. If I were you I'd concentrate on the reviews (which are good), esp. out in real-world scenarios so you're doing something different to the loads of other unboxers out there.