This is not the kind of music that I listen to, but as they say, there's good and bad music of every kind.
Usually stuff posted here is pretty bad, but you my friend, have done an excellent job. This is way better than I expected. You have a good voice, you can play your instruments, you can carry a tune. Already with that, you're rare!
The melody itself (and lyrics) is not exactly of groundbreaking originality, but it's not offensive - which is saying a lot, as 90% of the stuff out there is actually offensive.
And even more rare, I actually liked the arrangements, I liked how the drums and then the piano came in, all very well done. Outstanding.
Now, for the less positive. Who is the bufoon who mixed this and who was the recording engineer? Horrible job on both. Often your guitar steps on your vocal, and the sound balance sucks, the miking on both the vocal and especially the guitar is abysmal. Please sell your car or whatnot, and get someone who actually knows how to record and how to mix.
That said, if you can find an angle (so you don't sound like a million other guys) in your music, you can have a career - you're that good, technically.
