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Made this flyer to post up at work :)

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Sehnsucht

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I work in electronics at a certain very large retailer that recently began selling the iPhone 3G. 😉 Apart from maybe four coworkers who actually own an iPhone, I've noticed that no one else at work seems to know much about the iPhone at all, so I threw this together. What do you guys think?

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does your store claim to have the Best Buy ? 😉

Looks like it will help the individuals that are not too aware with what the iPhones has to offer. The first paragraph has a few errors in it. Sounds a bit funny when reading it aloud.

Perhaps the part reading "will be able to send MMS, or picture messages", may sound better if phrased "will be capable of sending and receiving MMS (picture messages)."

I personally think that you should have the iPhone pictures next to each other and the iPod Touch's next to each other, rather then separating them by generations.
 
From someone who designs crap, it's a design nightmare (a whole lotta text!!!) but a neat idea and start.

Considering the iPhones are either silver, black, or white, please dear lord throw some color in there. Even if you print that on some very light blue paper, please dear lord put some color in it. I would also work on removing the borders around the phones/iPods so it looks more like Apple send you some kit with those stock images.
 
Sehnsucht said:
I work in electronics at a certain very large retailer that recently began selling the iPhone 3G. 😉 Apart from maybe four coworkers who actually own an iPhone, I've noticed that no one else at work seems to know much about the iPhone at all, so I threw this together. What do you guys think?

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I like it.
 
Sehnsucht said:
I work in electronics at a certain very large retailer that recently began selling the iPhone 3G. 😉 Apart from maybe four coworkers who actually own an iPhone, I've noticed that no one else at work seems to know much about the iPhone at all, so I threw this together. What do you guys think?

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It would be MUCH, MUCH better in bullet format. Listing features in paragraphs is not a very efficient/friendly way to convey info.
 
Very praiseworthy…

But: Is this not what Apple, Inc. should be doing?

Especially if it is
a certain very large retailer
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How about contacting Apple directly and getting marketing material from them?

Just a thought.
 
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