Made this flyer to post up at work :)

Discussion in 'iPhone' started by Sehnsucht, Mar 18, 2009.

  1. Sehnsucht macrumors 65816

    Joined:
    Sep 21, 2008
    #1
    I work in electronics at a certain very large retailer that recently began selling the iPhone 3G. ;) Apart from maybe four coworkers who actually own an iPhone, I've noticed that no one else at work seems to know much about the iPhone at all, so I threw this together. What do you guys think?

    [​IMG]
     
  2. RTiii320 macrumors 6502a

    RTiii320

    Joined:
    Aug 15, 2008
    Location:
    Long Beach, CA
    #2
    does your store claim to have the Best Buy ? ;)

    Looks like it will help the individuals that are not too aware with what the iPhones has to offer. The first paragraph has a few errors in it. Sounds a bit funny when reading it aloud.

    Perhaps the part reading "will be able to send MMS, or picture messages", may sound better if phrased "will be capable of sending and receiving MMS (picture messages)."

    I personally think that you should have the iPhone pictures next to each other and the iPod Touch's next to each other, rather then separating them by generations.
     
  3. Michael CM1 macrumors 603

    Joined:
    Feb 4, 2008
    #3
    From someone who designs crap, it's a design nightmare (a whole lotta text!!!) but a neat idea and start.

    Considering the iPhones are either silver, black, or white, please dear lord throw some color in there. Even if you print that on some very light blue paper, please dear lord put some color in it. I would also work on removing the borders around the phones/iPods so it looks more like Apple send you some kit with those stock images.
     
  4. iNikon macrumors member

    Joined:
    Sep 18, 2007
    #4
    I think you have way too much time on your hands.
     
  5. Luke1robb macrumors 6502a

    Luke1robb

    Joined:
    May 3, 2008
    Location:
    Cambridge, MA/Smithfield, RI
    #5
    I like it.
     
  6. fleshman03 macrumors 68000

    fleshman03

    Joined:
    May 27, 2008
    Location:
    Sioux City, IA
    #6
    Wait -- the iPod Touch as an FM transmitter on it?
     
  7. joeshell383 macrumors 6502a

    Joined:
    Sep 18, 2006
    #7
    It would be MUCH, MUCH better in bullet format. Listing features in paragraphs is not a very efficient/friendly way to convey info.
     
  8. Morphkid03 macrumors newbie

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2009
    Location:
    Baltimore, Maryland
    #8
    Agreed. :)
     
  9. arkitect macrumors 601

    arkitect

    Joined:
    Sep 5, 2005
    Location:
    Bath, United Kingdom
    #9
    Very praiseworthy…

    But: Is this not what Apple, Inc. should be doing?

    Especially if it is
    How about contacting Apple directly and getting marketing material from them?

    Just a thought.
     
  10. dancavallaro macrumors regular

    Joined:
    Jul 13, 2008
    #10
    The second-gen iPod Touch doesn't have FM radio... :confused:
     

Share This Page