Mavericks Documentation

[Dj64Mk7]

I've been working very hard on something, and I would like the community here to look at it and help me fix it.

Please note that this is only this first part of it, and there is a lot more to come.
I just want to get a feel for where to go next.
Here's the link: http://cl.ly/3A1m37043w3e

This is a guide to OS X Mavericks, and it's the first big project I've taken on.
Please post all comments, criticisms, and concerns so I can review them. Thank you all very much.

 

[simsaladimbamba]

Maybe supply a PDF instead of a Pages document, since not even my Pages '09 version can open it.

 

[Dj64Mk7]

Maybe supply a PDF instead of a Pages document, since not even my Pages '09 version can open it.

Sorry about that. I'll go ahead and update the link in the OP.
Here's the new link, as well: http://cl.ly/3A1m37043w3e