The top one needs a little work in the lower right. You can see the gesso for god's sake!
The first one would be totally amazing if it was done on glass and translucent. The second one is cool as a painting.Have you ever thought about working on stuff other than canvas? That'd be interesting. I love the color arrangements too..
the second one is particularly good, give yourself a pat on the back!
Im going to assume that was a joke![]()