My attempt at Modern Art...What do you think?

[obeygiant]

The second looks a little like a michael shapiro...

 

[R94N]

I can see the similarity 🙂

 

[renewed]

I like it... more...more!

I'd like to see another one like the first one but done with less thought. Get something to put on your table and just go crazy on it.

Edit - found this and thought it was funny:

 

[rymack]

I like it... more...more!

I'd like to see another one like the first one but done with less thought. Get something to put on your table and just go crazy on it.

Edit - found this and thought it was funny:

So awesome....

I like them both. Next time don't let the edge of your canvas become a barrier...by having it breach the edge of your image plane the viewers eyes become more free to roam the entire work, rather than just the area that has been sanctioned off for them- in other words, far more possibilities for personal interpretation.

Despite what some may say as far as "I could do that" and "it doesn't look like anything but a mess" (and we all know that a lot of people look at contemporary art that way), the fact that people are talking about your work means that it is successful as an artwork. The whole point of art is to invoke an emotional response, and even if that response is negative, it's still a response, hence a successful work. Be proud, my friend!

 

[Consultant]

My kid can do that! =p

Jk. Looks good.

 

[wvuwhat]

If you decide to make a run of these. I'll take both. Blue and gold colors, please.

 

[Zombie Acorn]

It looks good, but it doesn't really do anything new. Then again neither has about 99% of the art that comes on the market anyways so you might be good to go.

 

[0098386]

I really like that first one! The other seems a bit too tidy and constrained.

 

[Melrose]

How big is the first one? It's like Pollock, but neater. I like the colour also. 🙂 It would be awesome if it was like 10'

 

[todd2000]

If you decide to make a run of these. I'll take both. Blue and gold colors, please.

I wasn't really planning on mass producing them, but I could make a few for some people if they are interested...

How big is the first one? It's like Pollock, but neater. I like the colour also. 🙂 It would be awesome if it was like 10'

10' would be bigger then my wall. 🙂 The poster board is 24x22." I would probably do a bigger canvas when I make the final product, or maybe two canvases side by side.

 

[djellison]

I like them. Getting a bit Kandinskiesque 🙂

My fav 'art' is when people take huge datasets and make them beautiful.

http://burritojustice.com/2010/05/19/look-upon-my-geotagged-map-ye-mighty-and-despair/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/walkingsf/sets/72157624209158632/


I'd have these at 30 x 20 inches on the wall, frankly.

 

[myibookrocks]

I really like both of your paintings. I'm also a fan of modern anything. Good luck with making your room modern.