As you may already know, I am working on a major new release of my game, Dungeon Diver. I have published the game's help file online for all to see, though it's not linked to anywhere on my site yet. That will change once I push out the new redesign for my site. Anyway, I'm wondering if there's anything I can do to improve the help file. Is it helpful? Based on what's there, is there anything that should be explained better? Here it is. This was designed in iWeb '08, and the site redesign will also use iWeb '08 as its basis.