My iPhone Mockup

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  1. Yeti89, Dec 27, 2011
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    Yeti89 macrumors member

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    I just made this today and want to everyones' input. Let me know what you like and what you don't like.

    I have also included a comparison photo with the white iPhone 4s.


    (Here, I have added a bit rounder and lighter version as well as a sort of white version.)
     

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  2. Schtumple macrumors 601

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    It seems too blocky, technically it's great, you've got a lot of skill, but I'm not a fan of the design so much.
     
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    I'm no art guru, but way better than anything I can do. Nice work.
     
  4. Trav29 macrumors member

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    I like the design. I would definitely buy it.
     
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    Wirelessly posted (Mozilla/5.0 (iPhone; CPU iPhone OS 5_0_1 like Mac OS X) AppleWebKit/534.46 (KHTML, like Gecko) Version/5.1 Mobile/9A405 Safari/7534.48.3)

    Haha, I take the HTC comment as a compliment. I like a lot of their designs.
     
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    Wasn't meant to be an insult, just an observation. :)
     
  8. Schtumple macrumors 601

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    Yes! That's a much better comment. Definitely couldn't see an iPhone with your design, but I definitely could see a HTC phone almost identical to yours.
     
  9. stickybuns macrumors 6502

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    Could you make a mock-up of a white one? I'd like to see how the narrower bezel looks in white. I personally find the squared edges/lines to be overly masculine.

    Small correction for the text: it should say "it's perfect" not "its perfect".
     
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    Hmmmm.....so where's the slot for the bread? I heard that the iPhone 5 makes toast.:confused:
     
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    Nicely done. I think a bit rounder on the corners but otherwise I like it.
     
  12. jm1.jonas macrumors member

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    It also looks a bit like the nokia lumia 800, probably because it's mate black!
     
  13. Yeti89 thread starter macrumors member

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    I was going for a brushed gun metal look. This is only my second day in Photoshop and so my skills are limited. I rounded the edges a bit but I think it could use a bit more still. I tried a couple of quick white renditions but i would need more time to get one that looks decent. I also lightened the color. Take a close up look to get a good feel.
     

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    Haha, yes. Thanks for the input. :)
     
  15. Lostanddamned, Dec 28, 2011
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    If you are using photoshop, you should have a font called myriad pro. That is the apple font. Try using that for the text and loosening the kerning a little, it will look more "Apple like". Check out this version of your username for an example
     

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  16. BlakeBrattina macrumors 6502a

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    It would look less 'blocky' if the center home button were still circular. Try one with those and see what it looks like!
     
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    The only thing I disagree with is that you call it "iPhone 5". I will be floored if Apple actually names it that. Calling it the iPhone 5, would imply that it is their fifth generation phone when it's actually not. If they stick to a numeric name, I'm inclined to believe they'll call it iPhone 4G or even iPhone 4GS. The 5 just makes no sense and I wish people would just let it go once and for all.

    As for the mockup, I think you actually did a good job with it.
     
  19. miss.manson macrumors 6502a

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    Hmm..It kind of looks like an android IMO. Just an observation.
     
  20. Apple OC macrumors 68040

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    your mockups look really nice ... however I actually like the iPhone the way it sits now ... I like to be able to reach everything on my phone with only one hand.
     
  21. cocky jeremy macrumors 68040

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    I'd like it with a white front/back in glass.
     
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    whats the screen size ? :)
    ahaha i like it good try man, it looks also like galaxy s2 a bit !!
     
  23. iCandii macrumors member

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    Cool mockup. Looks like a moto razr too.

    Do u think the ip5 is gonna be that square?
     
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