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My own iPhone ad

Pretty good. I don't care for the song though. It's too blatant about touching and pushing.

Also, when apple's advertisers do ads to music, they tend to be faster paced (except for the iPod Nano commercial to "1234", but even then the song is slow in the beginning). Some parts of this one seemed a little slow in some spots when compared to the music.

hope some of this was useful.
 
adrianblaine said:
Pretty good. I don't care for the song though. It's too blatant about touching and pushing.

Also, when apple's advertisers do ads to music, they tend to be faster paced (except for the iPod Nano commercial to "1234", but even then the song is slow in the beginning). Some parts of this one seemed a little slow in some spots when compared to the music.

hope some of this was useful.
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Ye I see what you mean, specifically I think in the beginning by the "phone" part. Thanks
 
mac17 said:
How do you like the iPhone Ad I made?
(I used iMovie HD)
Comments and criticism please.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cZlKaKpTGxk
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since you asked for C&C I'm a visual effects / broadcast student... and I like how you timed everything with the song, but I think you could have paced it a little better. ( and most commercials stick with the 15 or 30 second timeframe)

The concept of your commercial has been done before, but also the blending of the song would have helped with the fluidity. Im not sure if are going to be improving on it, but that's where I'd start.

Overall it's average. Thumbs up for representing and taking the time to create a commercial though :)
 
Was this not just Apple's efforts with Benny Benassi dubbed over?
 
mac17 said:
ok i revised it a bit,

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VnDqva6yPQ0
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A little better than the first, but it seems like you really tried to speed things up a lot.

I was speaking more of the hand movements being all over the place... obviously it's going to be harder to piece a commercial together due to the fact that it wasn't really filmed towards a commercial, but I dunno there's just something odd about the song pacing.

- Sunny
 
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what do I search for to view this on youtube on my iPhone?

Edit. I clicked on the link and it opened youtube and played it. Nice ad!!!!!! Amazing phone!!!!
 
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