My own iPhone ad

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    Pretty good. I don't care for the song though. It's too blatant about touching and pushing.

    Also, when apple's advertisers do ads to music, they tend to be faster paced (except for the iPod Nano commercial to "1234", but even then the song is slow in the beginning). Some parts of this one seemed a little slow in some spots when compared to the music.

    hope some of this was useful.
     
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    Ye I see what you mean, specifically I think in the beginning by the "phone" part. Thanks
     
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    cool video would of thought it was an actual one.
     
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    since you asked for C&C I'm a visual effects / broadcast student... and I like how you timed everything with the song, but I think you could have paced it a little better. ( and most commercials stick with the 15 or 30 second timeframe)

    The concept of your commercial has been done before, but also the blending of the song would have helped with the fluidity. Im not sure if are going to be improving on it, but that's where I'd start.

    Overall it's average. Thumbs up for representing and taking the time to create a commercial though :)
     
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    And its 8 seconds too long for normal comercial slots.
     
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    Was this not just Apple's efforts with Benny Benassi dubbed over?
     
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    A little better than the first, but it seems like you really tried to speed things up a lot.

    I was speaking more of the hand movements being all over the place... obviously it's going to be harder to piece a commercial together due to the fact that it wasn't really filmed towards a commercial, but I dunno there's just something odd about the song pacing.

    - Sunny
     
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    Wow chill out, what would you like me to call it then?
     
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    Wirelessly posted (Mozilla/5.0 (iPhone; U; CPU like Mac OS X; en) AppleWebKit/420.1 (KHTML, like Gecko) Version/3.0 Mobile/3B48a Safari/419.3)

    what do I search for to view this on youtube on my iPhone?

    Edit. I clicked on the link and it opened youtube and played it. Nice ad!!!!!! Amazing phone!!!!
     

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