Need some opinions on lessons and tutorials I wrote

[lamina]

When I get bored, I go to my university and write about things I know about. Please have a look at some of the stuff I've written and give me any feedback. Any constructive criticism is welcome.

Introduction to the Korean alphabet and a basic primer on reading Korean:

http://www.scribd.com/doc/33844048/Introduction-to-Korean-and-Hangul


A brief on depth of field in photography:

http://www.scribd.com/doc/34469811/Introduction-to-Depth-of-Field


Creating interest in photography:

http://www.scribd.com/doc/34469716/Creating-Interest-in-Photography

 

[mbarringtons]

A couple of notes on the Korean scribd post.

On page 2 you say the language consists of 14 consonants but then immediately say it actually consists of 19 consonants on page 3. It's obvious what you mean by reading page 3 but can be misleading?

Also, Korean isn't really read in clockwise order. 닭, 싫(어) are examples of this. I guess as a quick intro, saying it's clockwise is the best way though.

As for a better word than 암, maybe you could try 안 (安)? I'm sure you were trying to stay away from Hanja though.