News Report Critique

Discussion in 'Digital Video' started by kwong2006, Apr 7, 2008.

  1. kwong2006 macrumors regular

    May 16, 2006
    For years, I have relied on all of you to give me an overview of how I did in my videos and reports, and I need your help this time around as well.

    I recently made a report on the Iraq War protest, and I was wondering if you can critique it, and sound off on how I did

    The report

    Apple Product Pledge Statement
    The report is edited using Final Cut Pro 6, the graphics were created using Motion 3, and the Voiceover was recorded on Soundtrack Pro. I am an exclusive user of Apple editing tools.

    Many thanks!
  2. iMacZealot macrumors 68020

    Mar 11, 2005
    Good work! I think you'll make a good journalist. Just some comments:

    >The VO was a little too squeaky. Your voice isn't squeaky, but "S" and "Z" sounds were a little too sharp. Do you know what I'm trying to say?
    >The bug is inconsistent. Sometimes it's there, sometimes it isn't. Also, sometimes it was a little longer than in other parts of the video. Otherwise, I like the graphics. I like the lower thirds.
    >I wouldn't end with "360 News in high definition." I'd just end with 360 News, but I suppose in the real world, that's up to the assignment manager and not the reporter.

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