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waloshin

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Thus is what I have came up with so far.

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You have to move the black text, it appears to be higher up than the white text ´cause it´s on white.
 
Is there anything you'd like us to do with the logo? Critique it? Modify it? Print it out and mail it to the Pope along with a lock of our hair?
 
Critique it. Though sending it to the Pope would be great too!

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I have decided to do this:

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The umbrella represents that over the years my site has gained a bunch of different topics that interested me.
 
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I have decided to do this:

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The umbrella represents that over the years my site has gained a bunch of different topics that interested me.

Might want to kern it a bit, esp the L and I. The serif needs to be balanced out with the negative space.

My 2 cents 🙂
 
I think you need to start again. The logo is not conveying anything other than design for it's own sake. It seems strange to go from a completely abstract design to a little umbrella pictograph, it shows some muddled thinking.

Maybe try to stylise the umbrella and incorporate that if you want that image. I wouldn't bother with subtle type manipulation just yet, it's like putting lipstick on a pig, at least get the pig a decent outfit first.

The little coloured umbrella makes it look like an insurance logo.
 
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I have decided to do this:

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The umbrella represents that over the years my site has gained a bunch of different topics that interested me.

I like that much better.

You might have to play with the scale of the umbrella a bit. It might get too small if your logo is reduced a bit.

But that is definitely an improvement.
 
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