Nice job man, maybe I can help you out further. A while ago I tried to make sort of a poem to define Time, I know maybe an impossible and tough job to do. I am not saying I succeeded, it's just a minor attempt and it's more about the philosophy behind it. I also tried to combine math and grammar together. I wrote it like a sort of an equation to define a matter called Time. Even though it's not a quote I thought I'd just to share it with you guys.
On some point your Present
equaled
your Past where you pursued your dreams
it will equal
your Future achieved through these means
it equals
the moments Today you will worry on thinking about time-related issues provoked by your past, present or future, yet more important on some point today
it will equal
the moments which really matters, the only moments where you have the chance and choice to see, hear, feel, smell and taste life in all it's purity withdrawn from any worries afflicted or caused by Time, which only by the way
equals
right about
Now!
"Only Now matters and is real, time-related issues such as your past or your future only exists in your mind, therefore Time is fictitious and is bound to not exist."
