Shelter, Teaser Trailer

Discussion in 'Digital Video' started by shadowknight123, Aug 22, 2009.

  1. shadowknight123 macrumors newbie

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    My friend Brian Ivie wrote the script, and thanks to Andrew kramer with his awesome music compositions (I could never composite my own music haha)

    So here is our first release of any footage of our video, hardly any footage but its mainly a tease. I hope you all enjoy and feedback is greatly appreciated.


    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fMuOKWM2Hxw
     
  2. arjen92 macrumors 65816

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    Really great. Man I wish I would have someone to compose music for me. Sounded really great. The titles are done great, however there's one part one line is above the other. Most scary movies make them moving in an opposite direction.

    First I want to say again that the teaser was great, But you could improve on sound and lighting. I read that you might take it to a videofestival. If you do, record the sound with a good microphone, cause the sound sounds a bit hollow (like in a room). Also, at 0:38 the lighting isn't great. It makes it more obvious you aren't filming with real film. pherhaps it needs some more direct light onto the characters. It also looks a bit yellow.
     

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