[ Short horror film ] Overtime working

Discussion in 'Digital Video' started by hoangnghiadat, Jan 12, 2016.

  1. hoangnghiadat macrumors newbie

    hoangnghiadat

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    Hi all,

    I'm from Vietnam and amateur film maker, I did the first film follow my concept, it's about horror theme .
    If anyone have any feedback, do not hesitate to share with me, I open mind ^^

    [ Short horror film ] Overtime Working



    Thanks for viewing!
     
  2. Frank Maxwell macrumors newbie

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    What editing software did you use?. Your sound needs to be refined. It all jumps in. Good idea but predictable of outcome.
     
  3. hoangnghiadat thread starter macrumors newbie

    hoangnghiadat

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    I used iMovies, I edit sound by Audition Adobe, I will try practice more, thanks for your comment. I hope the next will be more better :)
     
  4. hoangnghiadat thread starter macrumors newbie

    hoangnghiadat

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    May I have some more comments ^^ short film is no conversation, so don't worry the language :)
     
  5. Jimrhodo macrumors newbie

    Jimrhodo

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    4389 views and only 3 replies? I don’t understand.
    My response:
    Editing a bit jumpy: made me realise there was a crew rather than losing myself in the story.
    Was this a punishment? Bathos? An allusion to something else?
    Plot:
    Overtime worker is alarmed to hear someone is in building.
    Investigates.
    The someone is suddenly in front of him.
    Who is she? Does he know her? Should he fight her embrace her or run away? Just puzzling and inconclusive.
     

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