Site Design Critique

[janitorC7]

Hey guys,

Working on a new site here and I was hoping to get some feedback.

Sorry about the screenshot; but, I have opted to keep the site on private servers at the moment.

Thanks

JC7

P.S. Avoid mentioning names, I don't want google getting at this (thanks)

 

[manueld]

I don't see any screenshots...

 

[celticpride678]

You didn't attach anything.

 

[Peace]

Minimalistic. I like it.

 

[janitorC7]

good point, why did that not work I wonder...



oooo because MR does not let us upload TIFF's.. damn you Grab

You didn't attach anything.

I don't see any screenshots...

Minimalistic. I like it.

haha

 

[AppleCode]

good point, why did that not work I wonder...



oooo because MR does not let us upload TIFF's.. damn you Grab








haha

I like it its modern and fun, I like the underwater sand castle theme nice and refined good job.
P.S. I don't think golfed is a word, but then again I could be wrong

 

[manueld]

Like it so far. The head section is well polished but the content section needs work. The spacing between the three columns are off, the right column has a huge margin while the left one is minimal.

I would also add some other design element on the titles just to make the look more cohesive.

my 2cents.

 

[janitorC7]

I like it its modern and fun, I like the underwater sand castle theme nice and refined good job.
P.S. I don't think golfed is a word, but then again I could be wrong

I will check with the copywriter on that one; but, I just looked it up and I think that you are right

 

[manueld]

I like it its modern and fun, I like the underwater sand castle theme nice and refined good job.
P.S. I don't think golfed is a word, but then again I could be wrong

Golfed is a word
golf (glf, gôlf)
n.
A game played on a large outdoor course with a series of 9 or 18 holes spaced far apart, the object being to propel a small, hard ball with the use of various clubs into each hole with as few strokes as possible.
intr.v.
golfed, golf·ing, golfs
To play this game.

 

[janitorC7]

Like it so far. The head section is well polished but the content section needs work. The spacing between the three columns are off, the right column has a huge margin while the left one is minimal.

I would also add some other design element on the titles just to make the look more cohesive.

my 2cents.

I was thinking something for the titles too; but, I really can't think of anything, it's been driving me crazy!!! Everything I have tried looks like too much so far.

More is going into the right margin; Drupal just put the login there and I'm still programming some new modulas for twitter, events, photo gallery and newsletter sign-up (not all of them going on all of the pages obviously)

 

[AppleCode]

Golfed is a word
golf (glf, gôlf)
n.
A game played on a large outdoor course with a series of 9 or 18 holes spaced far apart, the object being to propel a small, hard ball with the use of various clubs into each hole with as few strokes as possible.
intr.v.
golfed, golf·ing, golfs
To play this game.

Sorry, It just doesn't sound right to me.

 

[Mal]

Golfed is a word
golf (glf, gôlf)
n.
A game played on a large outdoor course with a series of 9 or 18 holes spaced far apart, the object being to propel a small, hard ball with the use of various clubs into each hole with as few strokes as possible.
intr.v.
golfed, golf·ing, golfs
To play this game.

Sorry, It just doesn't sound right to me.

Played golf would be the typical accepted form, but golfed is correct, just rarely used. "I golfed today" vs "I played golf today" is simply a matter of preference and common usage. Both are correct grammar though.

jW

 

[manueld]

Sorry, It just doesn't sound right to me.

There are many words in the english language that doesn't sound right to me as well but are considered correctly..I always wondered who makes this stuff up.

 

[THX1139]

Don't care for the page header. I read it as a big dark grey rectangle; it's not integrated into the rest of the design and draws too much attention to itself.