Site Design Critique

Discussion in 'Web Design and Development' started by janitorC7, Aug 20, 2010.

  1. janitorC7 macrumors 6502a

    janitorC7

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    Hey guys,

    Working on a new site here and I was hoping to get some feedback.

    Sorry about the screenshot; but, I have opted to keep the site on private servers at the moment.

    Thanks

    JC7

    P.S. Avoid mentioning names, I don't want google getting at this (thanks)
     
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  5. janitorC7 thread starter macrumors 6502a

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    good point, why did that not work I wonder...



    oooo because MR does not let us upload TIFF's.. damn you Grab


    haha
     

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    I like it its modern and fun, I like the underwater sand castle theme nice and refined good job. :)
    P.S. I don't think golfed is a word, but then again I could be wrong:D
     
  7. manueld macrumors 6502

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    Like it so far. The head section is well polished but the content section needs work. The spacing between the three columns are off, the right column has a huge margin while the left one is minimal.

    I would also add some other design element on the titles just to make the look more cohesive.

    my 2cents.
     
  8. janitorC7 thread starter macrumors 6502a

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    I will check with the copywriter on that one; but, I just looked it up and I think that you are right
     
  9. manueld macrumors 6502

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    Golfed is a word
    golf (glf, gôlf)
    n.
    A game played on a large outdoor course with a series of 9 or 18 holes spaced far apart, the object being to propel a small, hard ball with the use of various clubs into each hole with as few strokes as possible.
    intr.v.
    golfed, golf·ing, golfs
    To play this game.
     
  10. janitorC7 thread starter macrumors 6502a

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    I was thinking something for the titles too; but, I really can't think of anything, it's been driving me crazy!!! Everything I have tried looks like too much so far.

    More is going into the right margin; Drupal just put the login there and I'm still programming some new modulas for twitter, events, photo gallery and newsletter sign-up (not all of them going on all of the pages obviously)
     
  11. AppleCode macrumors regular

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    Sorry, It just doesn't sound right to me.
     
  12. Mal macrumors 603

    Mal

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    Played golf would be the typical accepted form, but golfed is correct, just rarely used. "I golfed today" vs "I played golf today" is simply a matter of preference and common usage. Both are correct grammar though.

    jW
     
  13. manueld macrumors 6502

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    There are many words in the english language that doesn't sound right to me as well but are considered correctly..I always wondered who makes this stuff up.
     
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    Don't care for the page header. I read it as a big dark grey rectangle; it's not integrated into the rest of the design and draws too much attention to itself.
     

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