The classic: Please critique this site

[Les Kern]

The overall look is fine. Business folks don't like to waste time in admiration, but rather want to get in, see, and either leave or investigate further.
BUT
Being in education, having owned a few businesses, and having quite a bit of experience under my belt, you absolutely MUST re-write the top sentence:
"Whether you have twenty or twenty thousand patients, iExam can help you by organizing them in a way beneficial in such ways from diagnosing your patients to covering yourself from lurking legal action."

(PLEASE take the following as constructive!)

It make no sense at all, especially "...by organizing them in a way beneficial in such ways from diagnosing your patients to covering yourself from..."
Wow. Really bad.

"lurking legal action" is NOT what anyone wants to see! Lose lurking.

My humble opinion: Keep the look, lose the english parts.
If I may:

"Whether you have 20 or 20,000 patients, iExam can help you not only keep an accurate record of any patients history which will assist you in caring for them, but that history could be beneficial in any litigation."

But that's one poor example...

Also, I'd HIGHLIGHT benefits to patients. The real value to any GOOD doctor is the well-being of their patients. Stress THAT and not "legal action". They'll get the drift even if it's only mentioned briefly.
It's the PEOPLE man!

Hope this helps.........

 

[scem0]

My only suggestion is to provide screenshots.

scem0

 

[rand()]

Hey!

I think it's a pretty good looking site. I would darken up the tagline a bit - it almost blends. I get the "barely readable" thing, but I think you're on the edge of too 'barely.'

I disagree with the fixed width issue - I would rather see you use more dynamic font sizes. Compensate for window width by adjusting the sizes. That's going to liven up the entire page, regardless of which resolution the target's running in.

The wordings are terrible, but like you said, it's just filler for now.

Good work!

-rand()