Trifold Design Critique

Discussion in 'Design and Graphics' started by macgfxdesigner, Feb 27, 2007.

  1. macgfxdesigner macrumors regular

    Sep 27, 2004
    I am doing some more freelance work and this time its for a friend's sponsorship program in Haiti. All that was supplied from the client was the logo and some of the copy in the brochure...

    Would love your opinion on the design and layout :)



    The next project for me is to design them a website with the same look.

    Thank in advance, Matt
  2. tobefirst macrumors 68040


    Jan 24, 2005
    St. Louis, MO
    I would almost like to see the registration panel swapped with the inside-right panel (The one with 4500 real big on it). I think that the 4500 panel seems kind of out of place right now. It's making an important statement, but it's in one of the least prominent positions. I'd like to see it to where, when the trifold is first opened, and you see only two panels, you see it.
  3. LeviG macrumors 65816

    Nov 6, 2006
    Norfolk, UK
    I know this is going to sound daft but why are you asking us for critique, why aren't you asking the client, they are after all the ones the work is being done for.

    But the main thing I will pick up on is the girl and boy, they need to be cut out better, they look like they were done in a rush to me.

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