Upcoming Series Logo

Discussion in 'Design and Graphics' started by aaronb, Jul 22, 2006.

  1. aaronb macrumors regular

    Jun 13, 2006
    Hey guys,

    I'm designing a logo for an upcoming series at our Youth Group. I was just wanting to get some feedback and constructive criticism on what I have done as of right now.

    Check it out:
    http://webpages.charter.net/mjam/Death Series.jpg

  2. beatsme macrumors 65816


    Oct 6, 2005
    I LOVE the color scheme, though it wasn't quite obvious to me what exactly I was looking at...it took a minute for it to register that I was looking at a pair of hands. Anyway, the hands are rather evocative of an archway...have you thought about maybe using a pic of an actual archway in place of the hands? It would give a sense of transition, or passing through...death is a doorway, that kind of thing...

    just a thought...
  3. BlueRevolution macrumors 603


    Jul 26, 2004
    Montreal, QC
    I like the design as well, although I find the text somewhat hard to read. Perhaps a different colour, or larger type?
  4. aaronb thread starter macrumors regular

    Jun 13, 2006
    Thanks for the feedback, guys!
    Yeah, I definitely agree with the both of you, the hands and the font are a little tough to distinguish so I might tweak them so that they will be more emphasized.

    I really wanted to go with kind of a browner/earth tone/underground kind of theme to kind of symbolize the whole earth thing. It's tough to make a logo about death and not have a picture of a graveyard or something TOTALLY obvious! :)
  5. JasonElise1983 macrumors 6502a


    Jun 2, 2003
    Between a rock and a midget
    i like the subtelty (sp?) of it all. The text underdeath just needs to be emphasized more and maybe not in that typeface. Anyway, other than that i think it looks great!
  6. mactib macrumors member


    Jul 21, 2006
    I think the typeface is perfect, may be you want to "bold" the " and why its not the end" part a bit more. If you try it in a serrif font it might work...maybe something like good old Palatino or Times New Roman? I really like the theme of "dust to dust and ashes to ashes" and the whole circle of life thingie..great job
  7. bowens macrumors 6502a


    Jun 19, 2006
    Trenton, FL

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