Web Critique

[0009382]

Hi, I haven't put the site up yet, or don't plan on it for awhile, but tell me what you think, I have a jpeg image of it attached.

 

[citizenzen]

Blocky.

So maybe "myBox" was the perfect choice.

 

[Cerebrus' Maw]

Blocky.

So maybe "myBox" was the perfect choice.

On topic. I like the overall feel, but not a fan of the red sub heading, or how each of the letters are again repeated in boxes of their own.

Good first draft though,

 

[eleven2brett]

but not a fan of the red sub heading

This was my first thought. I barely saw the title there at all.

 

[0009382]

Interesting. Do you believe the text should be larger on the sub-header which is sort of my header I guess.

 

[adamfishercox]

there is no format to anything there. the only thing aligned to any sort of grid is the top 5 boxes. the mybox.com header isn't centered on anything, then there's the random "mybox" thing in the white space, and then all the empty space in there.

Spacing things out a lot better will go a long way.