Web Critique

Discussion in 'Web Design and Development' started by nelsencaleb, Apr 8, 2010.

  1. nelsencaleb macrumors regular

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    #1
    Hi, I haven't put the site up yet, or don't plan on it for awhile, but tell me what you think, I have a jpeg image of it attached.
     

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  2. citizenzen macrumors 65816

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    #2
    Blocky.

    So maybe "myBox" was the perfect choice.
     
  3. Cerebrus' Maw macrumors 6502

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    #3

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    On topic. I like the overall feel, but not a fan of the red sub heading, or how each of the letters are again repeated in boxes of their own.

    Good first draft though,
     
  4. eleven2brett macrumors regular

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    This was my first thought. I barely saw the title there at all.
     
  5. nelsencaleb thread starter macrumors regular

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    #5
    Interesting. Do you believe the text should be larger on the sub-header which is sort of my header I guess.
     
  6. adamfishercox macrumors 6502

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    there is no format to anything there. the only thing aligned to any sort of grid is the top 5 boxes. the mybox.com header isn't centered on anything, then there's the random "mybox" thing in the white space, and then all the empty space in there.

    Spacing things out a lot better will go a long way.
     

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