Website critique

Discussion in 'Web Design and Development' started by JackT06, Feb 22, 2011.

  1. JackT06, Feb 22, 2011
    Last edited: Feb 22, 2011

    JackT06 macrumors 6502

    JackT06

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    #1
    I have attached what i have done so far (not on the web yet).

    Please could i have some feedback on the design... what's bad, goood, what could be improved and HOW?

    The website is for people aged 15-21.

    Somethings that i plan on doing is in the box on the right hand doing something like the attached, i'm just trying to work out how at the moment.

    Please note, this is my first time making my OWN CSS styleshet, i normally edit a template.

    Thanks!:D
     

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  2. celticpride678

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    #2
    It's a very good start, but the header just isn't appealing to me.
     
  3. JackT06 thread starter macrumors 6502

    JackT06

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    #3
    How would you suggest making it more appealing?
     
  4. celticpride678

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    #4
    Maybe a very light background color?
     
  5. WildGuess macrumors regular

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    Perhaps words dealing with first aid shouldn't look like they're plinked up with a .22?
     
  6. Tomple macrumors 6502a

    Tomple

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    I've circled what I don't like

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    I find the donate image to be somewhat unappealing, and I have an issue with the "&" symbol.

    I recommend just using no image for the donate button (or maybe a paypal image). Also you can just remove the "&" entirely and simply have the two logos.
     
  7. JackT06 thread starter macrumors 6502

    JackT06

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    What sort of colour would you suggest?

    The font that is used for the banner is the Red Cross branding font.

    Thanks for that, i now know what sort of things to look out for.
     

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