Word, gee, aint into alot of gangsta rap more into rap which tells a story or chilled mellow rap like lost boyz style, remeber good rap doesnt need a whole lot of cursing.alex_ant said:I am totally down with these lyrics, yo. They be totally pimping. Fo sho
I ATTEMPT to rap I will post clips when I improve, I'm only 16 so my voice isnt deep enough a lot of the time.applegirl said:It looks good to me...I'd say probably 75% of the battle is if you have the skill to make it SOUND good. Have any links to sound clips (do you rap or only write lyrics)?
Patmian212 said:I ATTEMPT to rap I will post clips when I improve, I'm only 16 so my voice isnt deep enough a lot of the time.
alex_ant said:I am totally down with these lyrics, yo. They be totally pimping. Fo sho
No its alright, actually in the end its not about a veteran at all, and the story isnt about me its dedicated to a friend of mine who is 22 and is going through a rough time dont want to get into specifics but its just ment to convey struggle and strife, I will post more lyrics later, also I have a beat for this song but how do I post it on MR any free hosting options?nospleen said:If you are 16 why are you writing about being a veteran and war experiences? Just curious, I am not trying to be rude or anything. I would think most 16 year olds would rap about missing the bus and stuff...![]()
Patmian212 said:No its alright, actually in the end its not about a veteran at all, and the story isnt about me its dedicated to a friend of mine who is 22 and is going through a rough time dont want to get into specifics but its just ment to convey struggle and strife, I will post more lyrics later, also I have a beat for this song but how do I post it on MR any free hosting options?
nospleen said:Okay, gotcha. Sorry to hear that about your friend. Open up garageband and get the song finished already.![]()
nospleen said:If you are 16 why are you writing about being a veteran and war experiences? Just curious, I am not trying to be rude or anything. I would think most 16 year olds would rap about missing the bus and stuff...![]()
iGary said:OT, but I had a dream I had to have my spleen removed last night, thanks to you, buddy.![]()
nospleen said:Uh Oh!! Maybe tonight you will have a dream about the Pulmonary Embolism I had after my spleen was removed!!Get ready for 2 weeks in ICU!! But, the good news is, you will live!
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iGary said:OT, but I had a dream I had to have my spleen removed last night, thanks to you, buddy.![]()