What Do You Think of My Rap Lyrics?


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alex_ant said:
I am totally down with these lyrics, yo. They be totally pimping. Fo sho
Word, gee, aint into alot of gangsta rap more into rap which tells a story or chilled mellow rap like lost boyz style, remeber good rap doesnt need a whole lot of cursing.
 

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applegirl said:
It looks good to me...I'd say probably 75% of the battle is if you have the skill to make it SOUND good. Have any links to sound clips (do you rap or only write lyrics)?
I ATTEMPT to rap I will post clips when I improve, I'm only 16 so my voice isnt deep enough a lot of the time.
 

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Patmian212 said:
I ATTEMPT to rap I will post clips when I improve, I'm only 16 so my voice isnt deep enough a lot of the time.
Nice lyrics though. Kind of like the man in your avatar. Except add the story telling part
 

killuminati

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Nice lyrics. Make a beat and put them together then post it here. I'd like to hear how it sounds.
 

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alex_ant said:
I am totally down with these lyrics, yo. They be totally pimping. Fo sho
lmao
as to the lyrics im not big on rap but I like some of it guess id have to hear it to music
 

nospleen

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If you are 16 why are you writing about being a veteran and war experiences? Just curious, I am not trying to be rude or anything. I would think most 16 year olds would rap about missing the bus and stuff...:D
 

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nospleen said:
If you are 16 why are you writing about being a veteran and war experiences? Just curious, I am not trying to be rude or anything. I would think most 16 year olds would rap about missing the bus and stuff...:D
No its alright, actually in the end its not about a veteran at all, and the story isnt about me its dedicated to a friend of mine who is 22 and is going through a rough time dont want to get into specifics but its just ment to convey struggle and strife, I will post more lyrics later, also I have a beat for this song but how do I post it on MR any free hosting options?
 

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Patmian212 said:
No its alright, actually in the end its not about a veteran at all, and the story isnt about me its dedicated to a friend of mine who is 22 and is going through a rough time dont want to get into specifics but its just ment to convey struggle and strife, I will post more lyrics later, also I have a beat for this song but how do I post it on MR any free hosting options?
Okay, gotcha. Sorry to hear that about your friend. Open up garageband and get the song finished already. :p
 

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nospleen said:
Okay, gotcha. Sorry to hear that about your friend. Open up garageband and get the song finished already. :p
Yes, and get working on the remix! :D I only listen to the remix. :eek: ;) :D

EDIT: Check out macjams.com -- they host garageband music for free, I think. There are others too...there's been at least one thread here with someone's music that was hosted on a Garageband-oriented site. :)
 

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nospleen said:
If you are 16 why are you writing about being a veteran and war experiences? Just curious, I am not trying to be rude or anything. I would think most 16 year olds would rap about missing the bus and stuff...:D
OT, but I had a dream I had to have my spleen removed last night, thanks to you, buddy. :eek:
 

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iGary said:
OT, but I had a dream I had to have my spleen removed last night, thanks to you, buddy. :eek:
Uh Oh!! Maybe tonight you will have a dream about the Pulmonary Embolism I had after my spleen was removed!! :eek: Get ready for 2 weeks in ICU!! But, the good news is, you will live! :D
 

FocusAndEarnIt

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oooo sooo tight dawg we ganna pimp da house! :rolleyes:




I hate rap... Rap is crap with a silent c. :rolleyes:

But, I love rock. We all have different tastes :).