What do you think of my Tech Show?

[InsightsIE]

I made a show called Geek Feed. Here is the latest Episode:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdwqBIqbdl8

Any suggestions?

 

[duotone]

I made a show called Geek Feed. Here is the latest Episode:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdwqBIqbdl8

Any suggestions?

- Nice start

- Slow down, you speak too fast and it's hard to follow

- Use transitions when you cut from one bit to another

FWIW

 

[puckhead193]

if your camera supports external mics... get a mic/lav

 

[FroColin]

Light your green screen better, you might want to get a plug in for FCP or if you have after effects then experiment a bit more.
Be a little more clear. You were good, it was enjoyable but I had trouble understanding you

 

[j3yq]

First off, I would like to say congrats for giving what you like a try. There are a few things that I seen that you could improve for your future shows.

-Know what your going to say before you say it, It looks and sounds more professional. (There were a few instances where you said one thing then quickly changed to the right word)

-Speak up, I had a hard time hearing you, so I would turn up my sound then when your swoosh sound transition came in it was like 10X louder.

- Body language, it just seemed to me that you start to grab something of fiddle around while you were thinking of something to say or when you didn't know how to finish off a sentence.

Keep up the work!

 

[InsightsIE]

Ok the new episode is up. Final Cut messed up the intro music but the rest is fine.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cIe-3t7KHNg


- Alot louder
- Better green screen
- Kept my hands together more.

Next episode i'll be using a teleprompter with my iPad so wont be jump cuts. Just need to wait for my 3v.

 

[THX1139]

Raise your camera or drop down so that your head is not chopped off. Nice that you framed off center, but you need to allow a bit of air above your head. With you talking so fast and the framing, I feel stressed out after watching it for 20 seconds.

Slow down and emphasis what you are saying.

 

[InsightsIE]

Raise your camera or drop down so that your head is not chopped off. Nice that you framed off center, but you need to allow a bit of air above your head. With you talking so fast and the framing, I feel stressed out after watching it for 20 seconds.

Slow down and emphasis what you are saying.

The way the camera and green screen is if you move up the green cuts off because the screen is mounted flat across a shelf so there's no shadows.

 

[Trigga Trey]

Nice Good Effort, But Yea You Kinda Speak A Little To Fast..Great Quality

 

[THX1139]

The way the camera and green screen is if you move up the green cuts off because the screen is mounted flat across a shelf so there's no shadows.

Change your lighting or move the green screen back. Seriously, the head chopped off make is look amateur.