First off, I would like to say congrats for giving what you like a try. There are a few things that I seen that you could improve for your future shows.
-Know what your going to say before you say it, It looks and sounds more professional. (There were a few instances where you said one thing then quickly changed to the right word)
-Speak up, I had a hard time hearing you, so I would turn up my sound then when your swoosh sound transition came in it was like 10X louder.
- Body language, it just seemed to me that you start to grab something of fiddle around while you were thinking of something to say or when you didn't know how to finish off a sentence.
Keep up the work!