Some constructive criticism - I'm an editor at a newspaper, so take it with a grain of salt
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You don't want to give an opinion, you want this to be based on facts. It's OK to let people you interview have an opinion, but make sure the reporting is balanced.
What I would suggest is if you do a story where you actually talk to some students on campus. I would also talk to the school's IT department to get an opinion from a professional. Actually talking to people and reporting is completely different from pulling quotes off an internet forum. If you could take mugshots of the people you interview and turn in with the story that would be awesome.
I would also give them information to use in a chart (every editor loves a breakout). Breakdown different uses for computers (gaming, graphic design, word processing, basic internet, etc.) and chart out information how Apple and PC fare in each category. Again, this is going to have to be based on facts, meaning you'll need to source it. A website would be a decent source for this, just make sure it's reputable. Whatever you do, do not source Wikipedia.
I know this is just a sample, but approach it with the intention that they ARE going to publish it, you want to show them that you can do the job.
Did they tell you how long to write? If it were me I'd give them 17-20" of copy for the main story and probably 6 different categories for the chart.
Feel free to PM me if you have any questions.
You don't want to give an opinion, you want this to be based on facts. It's OK to let people you interview have an opinion, but make sure the reporting is balanced.
What I would suggest is if you do a story where you actually talk to some students on campus. I would also talk to the school's IT department to get an opinion from a professional. Actually talking to people and reporting is completely different from pulling quotes off an internet forum. If you could take mugshots of the people you interview and turn in with the story that would be awesome.
I would also give them information to use in a chart (every editor loves a breakout). Breakdown different uses for computers (gaming, graphic design, word processing, basic internet, etc.) and chart out information how Apple and PC fare in each category. Again, this is going to have to be based on facts, meaning you'll need to source it. A website would be a decent source for this, just make sure it's reputable. Whatever you do, do not source Wikipedia.
I know this is just a sample, but approach it with the intention that they ARE going to publish it, you want to show them that you can do the job.
Did they tell you how long to write? If it were me I'd give them 17-20" of copy for the main story and probably 6 different categories for the chart.
Feel free to PM me if you have any questions.