Originally posted by Mr. Anderson
Ok, I'll start and lets get some feedback
www.gone3d.com/mr/
nothing fancy, just a start, but it does have a button and a link to the FAQ page. So we'll need to update the FAQ so that the first entry is about joining the team.
And, btw, its only 4k - plenty of room for lots more too....
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First couple of things. Y ou're right. It's VERy rudimentary. The moving arrows are a bit cheesy and cliché Flash.
The bright yellow and bright blue are too "computer-ish". They remind me of Deskmate's interface from my old Tandy 1000.
If you're going to use that as text, i'd probably switch the headlines i.e., make the "help make a difference" job the focal point. Lure people in with something they can understand.
Your font for both is also a bit light. In the quick flash world of web animation, I think you need something a bit bolder. Trade Gothic Condensed Italic would work wonders.
I'd also ditch the graduated tone. That stuff always tends to look very 1st year design school.... especially with those colors.
Think a little outside of the boxmaybe get some inspiration from medical/pharmaceutical sites. They use some awesome color schemes and modern, fresh fonts.
I also think that it need some sort of logo to brand it. Maybe the MR logo? I'm not sure. But it DEFINITELY needs a graphic of some sort.
www.istockpro.com or
www.istockphoto.com might be a nice source of imagery at reasonable costs.
www.zoloft.com has a nice color scheme and some elegant flash animation
www.paxil.com and
http://us.gsk.com/ also have nice schemes.
I think you'll want something softer and inviting overall. Whereas right now, you're kinda hard edged and cold.