Dont you guys think this would be a good ad for the iPhone 3G??

[kwjohns]

They're all terrible. Apple hires graphic designers for a reason...

 

[Standard]

You need to work on your kerning and manipulation.

 

[razorianfly]

I just couldn't resist ...

R-Fly

 

[gibbz]

Pretty slick R-Fly!!

 

[L3X]

I just couldn't resist ...

R-Fly

not bad.

 

[MacFly123]

It's the context in witch he submitted it. He asked if this would be a good ad for Apple to use and said he had submitted it, implying that he thought his ad should be used by Apple. To do something on an amateur level and expect it to be suitable for an advertising campaign for a multi billion dollar company pretty much guarantees you will be shot down. Now if he had posted it and said hey I'm new to photoshop and thought I would use an iPhone ad as a practice exercise what do you think he would have gotten a very different response. I think it's ok and has some good qualities but it's just not on the level of something I would expect to see from Apple's ad campaigns.

Ok that's fine, and I agree with you, but what if it was your kid??? I think you might handle it a bit different even if they really thought it was good enough! That's my only point.

 

[razorianfly]

Pretty slick R-Fly!!

not bad.

Thank you.

R-Fly

 

[Fulgham]

It's the context in witch he submitted it. He asked if this would be a good ad for Apple to use and said he had submitted it, implying that he thought his ad should be used by Apple. To do something on an amateur level and expect it to be suitable for an advertising campaign for a multi billion dollar company pretty much guarantees you will be shot down. Now if he had posted it and said hey I'm new to photoshop and thought I would use an iPhone ad as a practice exercise what do you think he would have gotten a very different response. I think it's ok and has some good qualities but it's just not on the level of something I would expect to see from Apple's ad campaigns.

FAIL... which witch did he submit it to?


LOL JK... figured I would give you criticism.

 

[IgnatiusTheKing]

I think Apple should use the "FAIL" ad.

 

[maiden16tiger]

dang people... it was just an idea.. im only 16 after all...

i just have a bad iphone obsession =D