haiku, can you?

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  1. 4JNA macrumors 68000

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    roses are blood red

    violets are deep dark blue

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    happy friday to you word warriors if they celebrate those in your country. just friday if not.
     
  2. jsw Moderator emeritus

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    I wanted to write
    a haiku for you to read
    and so I did it.
     
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    i did as well. thanks! :D

    given the domain name i guess;



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    I tried to write a
    Haiku, but I could not so
    I had to give up

    I call it "Awful". ;)
     
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    2 is 100% better than 1, and 1 is twice nothing. i win.

    Thank you Internet
    Today was Enjoyable
    Off I go to Dream
     
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    dream i did.

    had an unusual experience. last night i awoke from a dream that i've never had before. black and white, seemed like a scene from a Kurosawa film or something, and i somehow understood Japanese. felt real, can still recall a few details today. since i was up, got a drink of water and wrote;

    I dream in haiku
    I might have been Japanese
    in a prior life
     
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    haiku, i can

    i should be sleeping
    but something keeps me awake
    a thread on haikus
     
  9. 4JNA, Aug 19, 2013
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    haiku, you did. great one.

    there're like that, hard to let go once you get an idea going... hope you got some sleep!

    i'm on the other side of that equation and trying to wake up. every day must start the same for my safety and the safety of those around me;

    Flowering coffee
    working like a busy bee
    i seek your nectar
     

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