This has to be a fake. As a student in digital arts it is clear to see that these are fake or someone that created this has a serious lapse in judgement, twice. In creating video there are 2 "safe-zones" because the edges of video that you create on a computer monitor are cut off due to how TVs project the picture. These 2 zones are called Title Safe and Action Safe. Titling outside the Title Safe zone are likely to be unreadable because of how close to the edge they appear on a TV. The I (apple) NY in both versions and the Coming June 29th in the 30 second version fall outside of the Title Safe zone.
I am not saying that these can't possibly be real but if they are then there has been some serious oversight on the part of the creator, advertising firm or Apple depending on who made the commercial.