Web Page Critique wanted

Discussion in 'Web Design and Development' started by AWalkerStudios, Dec 26, 2008.

  1. AWalkerStudios macrumors member


    Nov 25, 2007
    Can some of you pros here take a look at my site and give me some feed back and pointers on my page as it stands now? I don't want to go to far into it before realizing I've made mistakes.

  2. sporadicMotion macrumors 65816


    Oct 18, 2008
    Your girlfriends place
    The text in the filmstrip is too cramped and needs to punch through more... an maybe space the white blocks out a bit more and make them a bit larger. I'm personally not a fan of inverted images... I would change the image at the top so that its the original image on a black background as opposed to just taking the easy way out and inverting... it also looks a little chaotic and doesn't look right... I would probably choose some different images. The camera seems a little cliche. Also the bullet spacing in "Graphic Design - Film/Video..." needs to be corrected.

    The idea is there, it just needs refining.

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