Web Page Critique wanted

Discussion in 'Web Design and Development' started by AWalkerStudios, Dec 26, 2008.

  1. AWalkerStudios macrumors member

    AWalkerStudios

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    Austin
    #1
    Can some of you pros here take a look at my site and give me some feed back and pointers on my page as it stands now? I don't want to go to far into it before realizing I've made mistakes.

    http://www.alexwalkerstudios.com
     
  2. sporadicMotion macrumors 65816

    sporadicMotion

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    #3
    The text in the filmstrip is too cramped and needs to punch through more... an maybe space the white blocks out a bit more and make them a bit larger. I'm personally not a fan of inverted images... I would change the image at the top so that its the original image on a black background as opposed to just taking the easy way out and inverting... it also looks a little chaotic and doesn't look right... I would probably choose some different images. The camera seems a little cliche. Also the bullet spacing in "Graphic Design - Film/Video..." needs to be corrected.

    The idea is there, it just needs refining.
     

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