Website Critique

[Apple Corps]

Wow - some thick skin is needed for dealing with some of the feedback

I would suggest:

A different logo, as others have said,

If a business, a different name if you can not register the .com,

A revamped layout, you are publishing a "portrait" site in a "landscaped" world. Look at all the wasted horizontal space you have. On my older 17" iMac (1440 x 900) I still have to scroll down to see what content may be there - go landscape.

 

[Sdashiki]

All you did was add some "3D elements" to it...the entire site remains very difficult to navigate. No cohesion between pages or links or even the buttons.

You are using 1990s styling on a 2010 website...that you are attempting to call "professional please pay us" website...its getting really sad to see the YEARS worth of design youve put into this and have NOTHING to show for it.

Your coding style is horrendous.

Straight HTML/CSS would better serve you.

Seriously, take the advice here ffs. START OVER. STOP USING THE SAME DESIGN ELEMENTS OVER AND OVER AND OVER...and calling it "changed".

You are getting to the point where you need to say "I quit".

 

[N16K NE]

**********New site hadn't uploaded yet**********


NEW SITE UPLOADED NOW.

 

[N16K NE]

Your coding style is horrendous.

Straight HTML/CSS would better serve you.

- I do not know how to "code" ?
- HTML/CSS ..... no clue.

Before you start having a stroke over my above comments.....PLEASE REMEMBER...I AM NOT STATING THAT I AM A GRAPHIC DESIGNER AS A CAREER.....THIS SITE IS A PORTFOLIO THAT I AM USING TO SHOW WORK THAT I HAVE DONE. This is a hobby that I have managed to get a few clients, all through WOM....not a career.

 

[Sdashiki]

"Please give me feedback on my portfolio for my small (on the side) design company I started a few years ago in my gap year."

Sounds like you're trying to get people to go to your site and pay you money for services found there.

- I do not know how to "code" ?
- HTML/CSS ..... no clue.

Thats obvious now.

So stop trying.

 

[N16K NE]

"Please give me feedback on my portfolio for my small (on the side) design company I started a few years ago in my gap year."

Sounds like you're trying to get people to go to your site and pay you money for services found there.



Thats obvious now.

So stop trying.

My site is solely for a portfolio. Not used as a device to gain extra sales. IF that were to happen - great. But it is not the reason for it.

"stop trying"....sorry I didn't know that iWeb was for only Web-literate experts out there! Should maybe tell Jobs that he's come up with a user-friednly tool for web-illiterate people out there to publish a website....

So any constructive feedback about what is loaded up now? Or still carrying on with you're words of wisdom?