Okay "that guy." The first picture has too much exposure. It actually has the color washed out and also crushed detail in the image. Also isn't cropped well, because it has to much being shown other than the subjects the photographer wants you to see. Actually I see no "rule of thirds" or any main compositions actually being used.
The 2nd photo uses "the rule of thirds" which it utilizes "Leading Lines" pretty well. The problem is it could have been done at a better angle. It's also in black and white, so it doesn't help your color argument.
My photo utilizes "rule of thirds" with leading lines to a subject. Also you mention colors and I have great color display without it being overly saturate. I went with a darker tone by increasing the contrast because I wanted the Alley to look gritty. But you still see great highlights coming from the sun bouncing off the graffiti walls.
With that being said. I'm no Scott Kelby and all, and I'm sure he could pic away at my picture. I know you're upset that I don't agree with your opinion or the competition, but my photo looks much better imo. 20 other photographers on Instagrams seem to like it as well, and none that follow me are friends.
1. There is washed out detail on the beach but this seems perfectly fine to me artistically and the reasons for it being washed out were mentioned on the previous page - limitations of the sensor. The skin of the subjects is exposed perfectly though and the juxtaposition of the pastel beach against the subjects is the point of the photo to me and why it's not simply a cropped in photo of the subjects. The fact that you are so focused on "crushed details" and "great color displays" and say the first photo makes you think it's shot on a point and shoot is telling of what kind of photographer you are - the kind obsessed with megapixels and technical details over art.
2. Rule of thirds is literally the most basic rule in all photography or film. Please. There's nothing wrong with it but there's nothing remotely interesting about it on a fundamental level. It's literally just the beginner guideline to creating the most basic rudimentary "pleasing" composition. And yes, I was fully aware the second photo is in black-and-white. It's also graded well in black-and-white, and the third photo's colour grading is fantastic.
3. Your photo has no focal point. It's literally just an alleyway. I refrained from talking about it in the first post but like the other guy said (and since you went there with the winner), you have overblown highlights too and a car that you didn't quite catch that adds nothing to the photo. Your colour grading (what little there is) may be mostly accurate which is fine in a photojournalism sense but not when we're talking about creating a tone and atmosphere. It has no atmosphere whatsoever. You telling me you wanted the alley to look gritty - to me the sharpness of your photo actually detracts from this goal. It probably would've been better in b&w for that purpose. Frankly, I don't even think it's a good photo (let's be clear, we're not talking about crispness or technical elements but artistically), let alone a photo that could come anywhere close to winning this competition.
I'm not upset that you don't agree with my opinion or the competition. You don't have to like the photos there. Like I said, I wasn't blown away by them but I did think they were good and pleasing to the eye. But I'm awestruck at the fact that you think the photo you posted has *anything* on the photos in the competition, let alone beats any of the three.
I think it's great for us amateur photographers to strive to create. But c'mon, I think you should also have some awareness of your own limitations (as I am fully aware of mine), especially when you post a photo as lacking in storytelling, atmosphere and tone or even a focal point as almost as a dare and state that you think it's better than the winner of this competition. How can you grow as a photographer otherwise?
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