I been trying to get in with Apple since June 2013. I believe that I am doing everything correct on my application. Also being that I have done the AHA position through a third-party company for the past 6 months, I thought that would help. With this being said, can you please go over my cover letter and sincerely tell me what you guys think? I think its short and straight to the point. Does it need more to get attention? Please let me know. Thanks...
My name is NAME and I am looking to apply for the above mentioned position(s) posted on the Apple job board. Working for Kelly Services as an At-Home Apple Advisor has provided me with the related experience. I am an empathetic, professional, and self-motivated employee; that is looking forward to assist Apple customers and work associates. My work ethic and good attitude; which I can bring to the table, will let me operate smoothly with the rest of the team members. My style of work enables me to work with little supervision and get the job done efficiently and in a timely manner. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience so that I may further discuss my job experience and present my credentials. I can be reached at or at .
Sincerly;
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